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Thursday, August 19, 2010

Old Forgotten Colours



On the brisk of hope,
In the lap of love,
I made my world,
With a few curtain curve.

I hold the pillow so tight,
To see the dreams in my night,
And to go lost in the eternity no wise,
Forbearing nothing but just a creepy disguise.

Acted like a sis, like a daughter, like a friend,
Like a student, like a teacher and many more then,
Which role did I miss & which one did I hit,
Don't know but just trying compromising the fit.

Red while frenetic, sad when blue,
Pink in the happiness in everything I do,
Selfish at some points or asking other's bliss,
That's how confusing my very nature is.

Don't look into the past just keep moving on,
That's my mantra I am deeply holding on,
There would be a lot to say under my shining star,
But till now that's my story, my odyssey so far !


I found this somewhere inside my old diary while cleaning the clutter. The poem sounds a little lame but reminded me of the old forgotten colors of my life.


16 comments:

WritingsForLife said...

this is quite well done :-).

I like your template.

Rià said...

Oh no i dint find the poem lame! :) Liked it, and like the template too.

Urmi said...

Thanks for visiting my blog and for your lovely comment.
I appreciate for your wonderful poem. Picture is very colourful and appropriate with the poem. Very well written.

Anonymous said...

u've nice about me very interesting.
poem seems quite well crafted n synchronized.

Echo said...

hey cute poem..did u write it>

Kavita Saharia said...

Beautiful words ...i am glad you rediscovered this lovely poem.

Bikram said...

it did not sound at all lame to me .. lovely i would say the old colours are always good and sometimes they bring smiles to our face ...

Rooj Siddiqui said...

Not at all lame. I liked it, well written :) ..

♥ÐÅyÐяєÅмє®♥ said...

it didn't sound a little bit lame to me ... wonderfully written.. I am not that much in poetry but if I can understand it and relate to it..the whole world can :)

Angels Never Lie said...

Thanks every one

Anonymous said...

A nice poem with truthness and compassion.

YAM said...

nice one.

and the photo is cute:)

Ph_ said...

I did not find it lame :)
Nicely written !

Angels Never Lie said...

@anegel n princess...thnks for commenting

Haddock said...

Lovely colours.

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Nice lines, interesting read.
Its been a good going this far, hope you carry on in the best of all spirits...

:)